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Hi all. C&C always welcome. Have a great week! ~ Carrol






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Jan 20, 2009 at 02:29 AM
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Looks like a kitty bank from it eye and wisker, but nice job.

Norm



Jan 20, 2009 at 02:46 AM
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Nicely done Carrol, never too early to start saving.
I do have one question and a tiny critique though: firstly, I'm curious about why she is holding the coin between her thumb and middle finger, rather than using her index finger? Second, I'm a little uncertain about the ceiling growing from behind her head...
Regardless, an excellent image, and I expect, shall be a "treasured" memory. (Sorry! )

Jason



Jan 20, 2009 at 05:11 AM
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Must be a halo rather than a ceiling.

I like the choice of monochrome for this image. For me it harkens back to a virtue of an earlier time.



Jan 20, 2009 at 11:08 AM
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Love the wide-angle distortion. Great concept and conversion. Nice "model", too.

Awesome Shot,
Chad



Jan 20, 2009 at 05:51 PM
 

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Great capture. Make you think about what she is hoping for by placing that coin in the bank... -Jamie


Jan 20, 2009 at 08:49 PM
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I like it!
First, to respond to some previous observations -
I don't think it's unusual to grasp a small or thin object between middle finger and thumb. For some people, it seems to give a little more control over fine movements.
I don't mind the ceiling edges. We see just enough to tell us that she's probably in her room, not in a studio setting. The contrasty lines may be a little stronger than ideal, but it doesn't really draw our gaze from her eyes and the coin.

I like the soft - but not flat - light, and the placement of every shape is perfect, even including the curls in her hair.

Charming and beautiful!



Jan 20, 2009 at 10:37 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · #328 First Savings


Very nice shot! You have done an excellent job on the conversion!
I am not a fan though of the had depositing the coin in the bank, It looks awkward to me, and of course... it could also be saying " f off this is my dime"...



Jan 20, 2009 at 10:39 PM
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Lovely shot; love the wide angle choice here. Such a cute model, and the kid is adorable, too! :-)


Jan 21, 2009 at 03:11 AM
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Excellent shot, Carrol! Beautiful little model, too!

All the best,

Endre



Jan 21, 2009 at 08:30 AM





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