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p.1 #1 · Recent Wedding for C & C

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Jan 11, 2009 at 02:57 AM

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p.1 #2 · Recent Wedding for C & C

Hi, I'm pretty new to posting on the forums, so bear with my comments. I think I still need to work on how I critique photos. I'm also still a learner myself.

Pretty nice shots. I think the big thing that could've enhanced these photos is adding some depth of field. Your subjects aren't really popping out of the photo when the background is also just as clear as they are.

I like #7 the best. Did you get any other angles of this pose? I'd say some close ups of it would've been nice. #10 is also a very nice shot. #3, #6 & #9 could probably have used some fill flash to bring them out a bit more from the backgrounds.

Jan 11, 2009 at 03:31 AM

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p.1 #3 · Recent Wedding for C & C

Same comments as those above. I think you had a beautiful couple, wonderful location, and some excellent photos. Right now I'm struggling with when NOT to use the lowest f-stop on my camera. But I do think you could have used a wider apterture on many of these. That would pull the subject away from the background -- making the subject the focus of the shots.

I really love 7 -- I think you could even make it more dramatic by adjusting the tone curve -- getting those highlights brighter and the darks a bit darker. The rim light from the sun works well. Great moments.

I'm not a big fill flash person (except when bounced -- love bounced fill), so I think that a simple exposure compensation for the ones mentioned above could also have made the subjects pop out a bit more. Looking forward to more posts!

Jan 11, 2009 at 04:26 AM

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p.1 #4 · Recent Wedding for C & C

7 is dying for a fill light camera right.

This whole set looks a little bit green square mode for my liking.

Jan 11, 2009 at 07:30 AM

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p.1 #5 · Recent Wedding for C & C

I agree with what's been said above, and I totally agree with what the Duke just said..........but I would probably knock the exposure down almost 2/3 of a stop and open the lens up.

Jan 11, 2009 at 08:10 AM

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p.1 #6 · Recent Wedding for C & C

Another post processing on number 7

This image is copyrighted by the owner

Jan 11, 2009 at 10:21 AM

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p.1 #7 · Recent Wedding for C & C

I would like to see some shots of the wedding itself.

-Zach

Jan 11, 2009 at 09:45 PM

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p.1 #8 · Recent Wedding for C & C

Thanks for all your comments

Bruce

Jan 12, 2009 at 08:25 PM

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p.1 #9 · Recent Wedding for C & C

There is a ton of color that could be brought out of these shots in post that isn't currently there.

Jan 12, 2009 at 10:09 PM

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p.1 #10 · Recent Wedding for C & C

Get high, get low and please, shoot at something other than F8. Some selective focus would add some variety.

Jan 12, 2009 at 11:42 PM

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p.1 #11 · Recent Wedding for C & C

Ditto to the comments above. Colors look flat and they are not looking at the camera, were you 2nd shooter or a guest?

Jan 13, 2009 at 01:16 AM

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p.1 #12 · Recent Wedding for C & C

Thanks, there are a combination of shots of mine and the second shooter my son. But I post things here to get feedback and I like the natural color, but I might have a look at increasing the saturation and seeing what they look like. Thanks again.

Jan 13, 2009 at 01:42 AM

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