I love the first shot, I just wish there wasn't all that bare skin off her left shoulder area. I know why it's there, and makes sense, since her arm is up, but man, its really fighting the face for domination of the shot. Great makup as well. Love the dress too.
I hate the lip hardware since I think it ruins an otherwise wonderful face (one of those "it was a good idea it the time" deals) but I really like the photos overall. Great job on the posing and lighting.
Not big on lip piercings myself, but-- what can you do? Ive seen ones that looks far worse :P
Ive been thinking about red eyes, but its so stressful with the hair covering.
(She uses red lenses sometimes, btw..but I didnt let her wear them for the photos, since I hate the reflex they give)
We'll see. Im gonna do a composite with this model to, I probably will take the time to fix cooler red eyes on that one.