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Dustin Jensen
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p.1 #1 · The Tenderloin

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3182/3065452496_a192037926.jpg

Playing around with some lighting. What do you think? All critiques welcome.

Nov 28, 2008 at 06:24 PM

Scott Stoness
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p.1 #2 · The Tenderloin

It has a strong green cast and she is framed through the joints. Neither appeals to me.

I like that she is interesting and not centred.

I think you could crop some off the top.

Nov 28, 2008 at 10:50 PM

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p.1 #3 · The Tenderloin

I like her pose - she's got some attitude

I try to concentrate on her but the car's headlights and the bright area on the top right hand corner keeps on grabbing my attention.

Arnaldo

Nov 28, 2008 at 11:06 PM

Dustin Jensen
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p.1 #4 · The Tenderloin

When you say framed through the joints -- are you referring to her hips?

Played around with the crop and the color a little what do you think?

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3057/3067650514_49329e71de.jpg

Nov 29, 2008 at 12:37 AM

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p.1 #5 · The Tenderloin

Much prefer the second.
I'm not sure I agree with Scott Stoness about "not framing thru the joints". It is good advice, but I'm not sure it applies to this image.

Scott (G)

Nov 29, 2008 at 01:30 PM

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p.1 #6 · The Tenderloin

I was referring to the waist as a joint. I think after looking at it again as sbeme says, it works here.

The new crop is much better.

Nov 29, 2008 at 06:29 PM


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