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 p.1 #3 · M in the old shower (nude) | |
Bonjour Yves + M. 
This is a nice image.
First, the model looks very nice (good figure and use of the figure in the image).
I don't usually comment on "backgrounds" but I do like the tiles seen here in the image, the long/tall format of the image, and the "linear" look to the image and figure. M has long graceful looking limbs (arms and legs look good here) and they look good when complimented with the "linear" elements of the background and plant.
I also like the BW too.
Overall a very pleasing image.
What to change/modify/consider?
I noticed that she is "reaching" with her feet (up on her toes or front of feet). This looks nice (at the foot level) and adds to her shape in the legs. Good thing to do.
But...I don't get that sense of "reach" with her arms. Instead, one looks like it is "propped" up against the wall and "static" (the bent arm with elbow to wall). So...the use of the arms does not "fit" with the use of or action of the feet and legs (lower part of image). They seem "incongruous" (don't fit or go together well). My natural "preference" would be to see the feet/legs lifting the figure, and the figure (arms) reaching with arms extended somehow. The graceful extension of the feet/legs should be matched by a graceful extension of the arms and hands (in some manner).
I hope these comments help and encourage you.
Good light to you both.
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