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thomps6s Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #1 · Fall Session Still working on my portrait skills. I am taking sessions whenever I can get them. Nikon SB-24 - shoot through umbrella for fill - camera right and close to the subjects @ 1/4 power. No Flash on this image. Next time I will watch out for trees growing out of clients heads. Nov 19, 2008 at 07:00 PM

Steady Hand Offline Buy and Sell: On p.1 #2 · Fall Session Hi Shawn, My comments below are offered in a friendly tone of voice and with the sole intent/goal to help you. Nice avatar. In the first image, did you lighten the shadows on the faces? Something about the mid-tones of the faces seems "light" or missing color/saturation/tonality. For example, the shadow is dark under the man's nose, but very light under his jaw. I think the last pic would be more interesting if we could see the faces. I hope these comments help you. Nov 19, 2008 at 07:07 PM

bryanlindsey Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #3 · Fall Session Nice pics. Maybe tone down the orange vest. Baby-with-football is awesome! Nov 19, 2008 at 07:27 PM

thomps6s Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #4 · Fall Session thanks for the C&C guys Steady - I didn't do any lightening or dodging that I can honestly remember. Nov 19, 2008 at 07:44 PM

Pfiltz Online Image Upload: Off p.1 #5 · Fall Session My words are offered only to help you in an effort to take your images to another level, and hope you take them accordingly. These comments are mentioned in a light hearted way...... Remove the tree out of her head in No.1 and No.2 Nov 19, 2008 at 07:57 PM

thomps6s Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #6 · Fall Session Pfiltz wrote: My words are offered only to help you in an effort to take your images to another level, and hope you take them accordingly. These comments are mentioned in a light hearted way...... Remove the tree out of her head in No.1 and No.2 Kind of like how I mentioned in the OP that I would look out for that in my next shoot? I don't think it is cloneable, at least not by me. Nov 19, 2008 at 08:03 PM

Jim Rickards Offline Buy and Sell: On p.1 #7 · Fall Session Hi Shawn. Nice fall colour in your shots. Being chided for the tree will probably result in you always checking in future shots, so maybe a good thing in the long run. Even with the trees, the shots are decent. I like the boy's picture. The only small nit I have for that is the shoes could be shown in full and you could show less above his head. The reds of his clothes are trying to blend into the background, but you have your lighting controlled well and his face is the definite highlight of the shot. I find my eyes travelling down one arm to the weathered football, then back up the other arm to his face again. Good job. Nov 19, 2008 at 08:50 PM

Ray Chopp Offline [ X ] p.1 #8 · Fall Session I am Ray Chopp and I did approve the following words. At least in the second shot they both have matching trees growing from their heads. Just teasing. But seriously there are so many small things to keep track of during a shoot. Sometimes even when you are totally aware of these things somehow they still manage to get in the shot. Keep up the good work. Nov 19, 2008 at 09:01 PM

jefferies1 Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #9 · Fall Session If the client wants the tree removed do a tight crop just above the head and fill in . It would be a simple fix and add focus to the subjects. Nice images. Nov 19, 2008 at 09:32 PM

ellwa627 Offline Image Upload: On p.1 #10 · Fall Session One quick tip on the posing... always make the mother look good. Were her hips directly to the camera, it makes her look much larger. Use positioning, shadow, and shield to create more of a thinning and flattering image of her. Also, different heights of heads in family pics ten to look more interesting and appealing. Just some thoughts. Walt Nov 20, 2008 at 05:42 AM

thomps6s Offline Image Upload: Off p.1 #11 · Fall Session Thanks for the tips guys, all great stuff. Nov 20, 2008 at 01:59 PM

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