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p.1 #1 · Street photography


Gilera GP800.



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The picture was taken for an article on this mega scooter.

Nov 19, 2008 at 06:08 PM
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p.1 #2 · Street photography


The light is nice, shadow works for me, but the sketch looking away and the static wheels on the scooter and angle of the rider makes it look like he's about to fall over.

Using the sketch on the other side of the scooter might have been cool...almost like even the picture is turning to look at the new scooter.

Need some sense of motion on the scooter/wheels, in my opinion.

Nov 19, 2008 at 06:29 PM
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I agree, the stop wheel action makes it look static. Might have taken a couple passes but the light is nice.

Nov 19, 2008 at 07:04 PM
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Wickedfn4u wrote:
I agree, the stop wheel action makes it look static. Might have taken a couple passes but the light is nice.


+2


Nov 19, 2008 at 07:34 PM
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p.1 #5 · Street photography


10x ..

About the frozen wheel.. It's a side effect of using a flash.
I increased the shutter time to even 1/30 and i got no blur/spin.

I tried to play with it in PS and i stay with the original version.
IMHO it doesn't distract too much the final impact of the picture.

10x again for your critique.


Nov 20, 2008 at 06:36 AM
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To get the motion, you could have used aperture priority mode so as to use a larger aperture with the flash. Second-curtain sync would put the sharp part of the photo (the frozen part) up front.

If you moved to manual mode, along with the larger aperture, the longer shutter speed would have worked together to capture even more of the ambient light - and the motion.

The additional shutter speed alone will not get you enough ambient light with the flash, as you found out.

Great idea - and you nearly pulled it off! (I like it anyway!)

Nov 20, 2008 at 05:08 PM
 



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p.1 #7 · Street photography


Although I do like the lighting and the concept, there was so much potential here that was just missed.

Nov 20, 2008 at 06:20 PM
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p.1 #8 · Street photography


I'll be more than happy if you can explain what potential was missed?

Nov 20, 2008 at 08:06 PM
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p.1 #9 · Street photography


You could clone her irises to the other side of her eyes and add motion to the wheels n photoshop, if ya wanna be creative.

Nov 20, 2008 at 11:44 PM
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p.1 #10 · Street photography


Showing some motion with the bike/rider would have added so much to this photo. Just my .02

Nov 22, 2008 at 05:49 AM
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If the image was for publication (as indicated in the OP) it would be a gross violation of photojournalistic ethics to clone irises or add motion in photoshop.

Nov 22, 2008 at 02:34 PM
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susi wrote:
You could clone her irises to the other side of her eyes and add motion to the wheels n photoshop, if ya wanna be creative.




Nov 22, 2008 at 10:46 PM




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