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Archive 2008 · #53 The greatest of these is...

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p.1 #1 · #53 The greatest of these is...

http://jordansphoto.net/fm/wjlove.jpg

C&C Welcome.

-WJ

Sep 12, 2008 at 09:44 PM

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p.1 #2 · #53 The greatest of these is...

The 640 here just loses something.

For anyone interested, you can see a larger version HERE.

Sep 13, 2008 at 09:39 AM

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p.1 #3 · #53 The greatest of these is...

Nice shot. Great heart shape, and I like your selective focus.
I'm wondering if a bit of vignetting might tone down the bright paper around the edges and help bring the focus even more toward the center.
Regards,
~ Carrol

Sep 14, 2008 at 08:28 AM

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p.1 #4 · #53 The greatest of these is...

Stunning. How about a square crop?

Sep 16, 2008 at 12:55 PM

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p.1 #5 · #53 The greatest of these is...

I like your shot and think it would be better with a little less brightness and a little more sharpening. Good luck.

Norm

Sep 19, 2008 at 03:48 PM

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p.1 #6 · #53 The greatest of these is...

I did something similar with my first assignment here and won it.

I'm tending to side with previous comments about cropping, brightness and sharpening. Good luck.

Sep 22, 2008 at 05:01 AM

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p.1 #7 · #53 The greatest of these is...

I have intentionally defocused most of the text, and on my screen the ring and Ch 13 text looks crisp?

Are you guys wanting to see all of the text crisp? Just curious, thanks for the C&C.

Sep 22, 2008 at 06:06 PM


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