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p.1 #1 · Football game


hi all,

i bought a EF 70-200mm f/4, so took it our for a spin on Saturday at a UT football game.

25 pics, so i uploaded on flickr, please take a look and give me some advice, C&C

thanks
http://www.flickr.com/photos/moody_blue_blue/sets/72157607064017080/

shot with 40d, 70-200mm f/4L, handheld, App priority at f4 mostly





Edited by moody_blue on Sep 01, 2008 at 08:37 PM GMT

Edited by moody_blue on Sep 01, 2008 at 09:24 PM GMT

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Sep 01, 2008 at 12:52 AM
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The white balance seems off - all that burnt orange color - just kidding about the burnt orange but not about the white balance. What did you have your white balance on - the field is orange too.

Did you shoot in raw.?

IS your monitor calibrated?

Did you use the centre focus?

What was the ISO, some seem soft but likey motion blur. Sport shots should always be >1/500?

I would use a monipod to at least decrease some noise from shake.

Sep 01, 2008 at 01:27 AM
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p.1 #3 · Football game


First, it is better to post several images here rather than have us browse the collection. Also, leave Exef intact.

General comments, and I did not review all images

at the largest size many are soft (IMG_2158 for example). I don't know anything about the lens but you might try stopping down a bit to sharpen - I didn't see anything suggesting focus issues;

well saturated, maybe a little too 'hot' for my taste.

I got this notion in my head that I would do sports photography and discovered my 80-200 f2.8 won't reach beyond pitcher's mound and 1st or 3rd base depending on the sideline and it, too, is a tad soft wide open. Guys over on 'Sports Forum' say you need 300- to 400 mm to get 'tight' images with attention to eyes and face.

Don't know what your objectives are but to me seems like you have a good kit to shoot in stands and perhaps sidelines.

Confused me at first - 'UT' - Tennessee doesn't play until tomorrow night

Bob

Sep 01, 2008 at 01:28 AM
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p.1 #4 · Football game


understood, i will look into white balance. my laptop monitor is of course not calibrated, so i tried to do the white balance of elements which i knew were white, uniforms etc


honestly, i got a new lens, i was excited, and i wanted to have fun.
sitting in the stands, i tried to shoot as best as i could.

i think it will take me a few months to understand the lens more.
but to me, this was more of capturing the theme of the game, the feeling, the euphoria, than being technically correct.

so i guess i want you to judge me more on the composition rather than on the technique,

but your critique is much appreciated and understood. Of course you guys are right.

thanks!





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Sep 01, 2008 at 05:20 AM
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p.1 #5 · Football game


moody_blue,

Personally, my whole purpose in capturing images is the same as yours - enjoy the moment and have fun - if I convey that in the image(s) so much the better. I've experienced the same situation you describe.

Along the way, I've become sensitive to common critiques on this forum: flat image, horizon not level, rule of thirds, too busy, focus on the eyes, no message, etc. that all contribute to better images. While I can sometimes produce a technically correct image, the 'art' generally still escapes me.

That all being said, if photography ever stops being an enjoyable experience, I'll put it aside and move along to other pursuits.

Keep shooting, enjoy it, and consider sharing the images with us.

Bob

Sep 01, 2008 at 12:40 PM
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p.1 #6 · Football game


These photographs are all useless. Personally, I think you should quit wasting your time shooting Texas football.

Ron

Oh BTW, I'm from Nebraska

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Sep 02, 2008 at 01:27 PM
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p.1 #7 · Football game


lol

Sep 02, 2008 at 02:25 PM
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p.1 #8 · Football game


I'm still bitter about the 2006 Rose Bowl....

From,
A USC fan.

Sep 02, 2008 at 08:29 PM
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p.1 #9 · Football game



"..this was more of capturing the theme of the game, the feeling, the euphoria..." which apparently meant lots of pictures of cheeleaders.

Looks like you did capture a good time - or at least as good of a time one can have while surrounded by horrible shades of orange (a failing of "UT" football no matter what state you are in)

[goes back to photo critique]

Sep 02, 2008 at 10:02 PM

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