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Sagar
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p.1 #1 · Street Photography Attempt

This is my old shot never dared to put for critique for FM earlier but I am looking for comments on how I could have improved it further...

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Jul 27, 2008 at 09:37 PM

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p.1 #2 · Street Photography Attempt

For me it is quite nice but would be better if it was a bit more symetrical without the tile in exscalator and getting equal of both left and right lights. I would crop off the top light.

Quite nice but would be better without the tilt.

Jul 27, 2008 at 09:42 PM

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p.1 #3 · Street Photography Attempt

Excellent. I actually like it as is. The top gives awareness of off frame and its just fine.

Jul 27, 2008 at 10:41 PM

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p.1 #4 · Street Photography Attempt

Very nice as is. Eyes peering down the elevator

Jul 27, 2008 at 11:50 PM

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p.1 #5 · Street Photography Attempt

Thank you so much for the suggestions and appreciations. Its so much encouraging to get feedback from experienced and pro folks here

Jul 28, 2008 at 12:13 PM

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p.1 #6 · Street Photography Attempt

Really, really cool!

1) I really like the way the two angled escalators lead you to the patterned lights at the top. Then your eyes are led down the escalator. Makes you wonder what is at bottom.

2) B&W really works for me in this.

Ron

Edited on Jul 28, 2008 at 02:15 PM

Jul 28, 2008 at 02:13 PM

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p.1 #7 · Street Photography Attempt

Sagar,
Here's my opinion :
The picture should be more symmetrical.
It would be more interesting if a person was on the escalator with their back towards the camera, maybe just showing head and shoulders.
DJ

Aug 08, 2008 at 11:10 PM


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