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p.1 #1 · farm machinery

Jul 10, 2008 at 04:40 AM

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p.1 #2 · farm machinery

Like the b&w conversion, and the composition is good. The bright background beyond the trees is a bit distracting. You might consider burning this a bit. Really like the relationship between the texture of the simple grass and the complexity of the farm equipment.

Jul 10, 2008 at 04:59 AM

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p.1 #3 · farm machinery

The piece that is growing out of the right side was distracting for me since it meshes with the fence. I also agree about the background, perhaps burning it and cropping some off the right side?

Jul 10, 2008 at 04:41 PM

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p.1 #4 · farm machinery

For me there is too much happening and no clear message. The light area under the trees to right is distracting.

I think that this subject has lots of appeal but you need to focus more on one piece or have less depth (lower fstop) to create a main subject with other things around it to complement it.

Jul 11, 2008 at 04:04 AM


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