Archive 2008 · In the fog

philtax
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p.1 #1 · In the fog

Hi all,

I have been out shooting in the SF East Bay hills during the foggy morning. The light is bleak but subtly astonishing. The thing is, I don't know if I've captured it or if these are just plain dull. Do any of them work for you?

Thanks!

Phil

Jul 01, 2008 at 10:34 PM

TrojanHorse
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p.1 #2 · In the fog

I don't think there's really anything in the first shot to "look" at... if there were a house, or some kind of feature.

I like the second one better becuase it looks like the trees are getting drilled by a storm rolling in, it's more visually appealing.

3 is too dark, but I'm not looking at this on my calibrated screen either, so take that with a grain of salt.

Jul 02, 2008 at 01:35 AM

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p.1 #3 · In the fog

Thanks for your comments!

Phil

Jul 02, 2008 at 11:08 PM

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p.1 #4 · In the fog

I like the 2nd. Nice colors and mood. The last is similar but too dark. The first has no obvious main object.

On 2nd it has a feel of a tilt (wind?). I would rotate a bit left and see if it improves.

Good one on 2

Jul 05, 2008 at 12:37 PM


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