Not sure, but here's some feedback:
2. Probably most saleable. Pretty scene. I wish part of the leftmost plane was not cut off.
3 I dont like this one. But its a matter of taste. The log/fallen tree is just too much for me. Couple of dust bunnies on your sensor to remove, below the roots, left and above the trunk, right.
4. Almost there. I like this composition quite a bit. Unfortunately. not enough DOF. Eye gets drawn down the track, but the bridge looks pretty soft, as does the surrounding foliage. I'd crop or clone out the blue structure far left. Bit of shadow recovery over the train.
sbeme wrote:
Not sure, but here's some feedback:
2. Probably most saleable. Pretty scene. I wish part of the leftmost plane was not cut off.
3 I dont like this one. But its a matter of taste. The log/fallen tree is just too much for me. Couple of dust bunnies on your sensor to remove, below the roots, left and above the trunk, right.
4. Almost there. I like this composition quite a bit. Unfortunately. not enough DOF. Eye gets drawn down the track, but the bridge looks pretty soft, as does the surrounding foliage. I'd crop or clone out the blue structure far left. Bit of shadow recovery over the train.
Thanks for the feedback. This is always helpful. I should have noted that by selling I'm thinking of greeting cards not big prints. Maybe that puts things in a bit of a different perspective.
#1 could be awesome with a little more blurring of the background and also a slight vignette around the flower and then another slight vignette that includes the flower.
crfrey71 wrote:
No to all of them. Nice shots but nothing that would stand out.
I tend to agree. When looking to buy something, I look for something thought provoking, that relates a story, stunningly beautiful and above all, unique. I'm afraid that none of these quite fit those criteria.
I think that the first is the best one. The others are sort of mundane. They are nice but not grabbing photos. Plus you need to show you pics at 800 x ? before you show them here. it makes it easier and most people can see them without scrolling. I'm doing this on a notebook so my viewing space is limited, but given that sometimes a smaller presntation is better on the web.
