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p.1 #1 · 9 Images up for Critique!


Here are some more photos from Ian and Matilda's wedding. I am thinking these are all very strong images that they will enjoy. What do you think? I always appreciate any feedback.

Thanks,

Martin.

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http://martinpaulphotography.com/IM2/01.jpg

2
http://martinpaulphotography.com/IM2/02.jpg

3
http://martinpaulphotography.com/IM2/03.jpg

4
http://martinpaulphotography.com/IM2/04.jpg

5
http://martinpaulphotography.com/IM2/05.jpg

6
http://martinpaulphotography.com/IM2/06.jpg

7
http://martinpaulphotography.com/IM2/07.jpg

8
http://martinpaulphotography.com/IM2/08.jpg

9
http://martinpaulphotography.com/IM2/09.jpg



Jun 12, 2008 at 02:35 AM
Jonathan H
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p.1 #2 · 9 Images up for Critique!


The images are strong, yes... but the picture of the bartender and the cellist? Strong images or not, I highly doubt I'd care about the "hired help" at my wedding. Even my photographer, who I'm friends with, probably wouldn't have his face in my wedding album.


Jun 12, 2008 at 07:35 AM
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p.1 #3 · 9 Images up for Critique!


Really enjoyed the images, Martin. Beautiful...my favorite from this wedding is still the tilted B&G picture of them on the dock.

Jonathan, I disagree. I have requests frequently to photograph certain vendors. I don't get requests for all of them, but I could see a bride wanting a picture of a cellist over a bartender. From a female point of view, she's spent a year (on average) planning this event, and she'll want to remember every detail of it, especially the fact that she had strings at her wedding. The bartender picture may not be something that the bride wants, but we tend to post images here that we like from a more artistic POV, not a wedding album POV.

P.S. My personal favorites just happen to be the bartender and the cellist!

Edited on Jun 12, 2008 at 08:05 AM



Jun 12, 2008 at 08:03 AM
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p.1 #4 · 9 Images up for Critique!


Not to speak for Martin here, but judging from the focus of the picture I'd say the subject was more so the wine itself and less the actual person serving it. However, like Cathy mentioned, there are some brides who insist on these types of pictures - every last detail she's been agonizing over (until realizing, years from now, she over-planned and didn't relax enough to enjoy it...oops, sorry, that was the bride from a recent shoot).


Jun 12, 2008 at 08:25 AM
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p.1 #5 · 9 Images up for Critique!


I like the picture of the wine, especially with the drip coming off the bottle. I wouldn't put it in an album, but it would be one for my collection. The last one, #9 is nice.


Jun 12, 2008 at 09:51 AM
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p.1 #6 · 9 Images up for Critique!


I like the picture of the wine, especially with the drip coming off the bottle.

+1...that's exactly what I liked about it.

Edited on Jun 12, 2008 at 10:12 AM



Jun 12, 2008 at 10:12 AM
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p.1 #7 · 9 Images up for Critique!


Oh yeah.. definitely need all the details of the wedding.... IMHO

Many brides spent months researching/planning for their wedding and I'm sure she would like to show "those" who didn't get to celebrate the important moment of theirs to know as much as what has happened at the event.

I see an event photographer to capture photo/moment which tell stories. With the Cellist's picture.. ppl can imagine/picture the atmosphere of surrounding and feel it.

Just my 2 cents...

Cheers
andy

Edited by andyvtec on Jun 12, 2008 at 03:17 PM GMT

Edited on Jun 12, 2008 at 10:17 AM



Jun 12, 2008 at 10:15 AM
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p.1 #8 · 9 Images up for Critique!


that sure is alot of wine...


Jun 12, 2008 at 10:17 AM
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p.1 #9 · 9 Images up for Critique!


Nice work Martin.
Watch the tilts, they are just a touch too much.



Jun 12, 2008 at 10:21 AM
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p.1 #10 · 9 Images up for Critique!


I have to say surprises me the criticism that the drink and musician photos are irrelevant or a waste of time. I agree that they are not nearly important as the couple or guests, but isn't it our job to photograph EVERYTHING going on? That was what I thought but maybe I am wrong?

Thanks for the comments so far.

Martin.



Jun 12, 2008 at 10:30 AM
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p.1 #11 · 9 Images up for Critique!


Of course it is our job to photograph everything going on !!!

Who knows what the couple will like !!!

Good job, good images !!!

Jaime
www.archivoybancodefotos.es




Jun 12, 2008 at 10:43 AM
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p.1 #12 · 9 Images up for Critique!


Oh, and BTW, the groom actually approached me and said "make sure you get photographs of the band". I already had but I got a couple more just to be safe


Jun 12, 2008 at 10:47 AM
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p.1 #13 · 9 Images up for Critique!


anyone else wanna give feedback? How does the PP look on these, especially #3 and #4 ?


Jun 12, 2008 at 03:16 PM
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p.1 #14 · 9 Images up for Critique!


Number one is my absolute FAVORITE!! That's exactly the kind of detail shot that DOES go inside my own storybook designs. It's artistic and beautiful and covers an area of her reception that she put a lot of money into.

The PP looks good. Though I'm not a fan of sepia (that's just personal taste, not a remark on yours in particular).

There are a few that seem only so-so to me... 3,7 and 9 as examples... but I'm also only moderately behind numbers 4 and 5.

I really like 2,6 and 8... though I'd have preferred the upright bass (not a CELLO!!) shot UNtilted.



Jun 13, 2008 at 01:23 AM
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p.1 #15 · 9 Images up for Critique!


unblinkable wrote:
Number one is my absolute FAVORITE!! That's exactly the kind of detail shot that DOES go inside my own storybook designs. It's artistic and beautiful and covers an area of her reception that she put a lot of money into.

The PP looks good. Though I'm not a fan of sepia (that's just personal taste, not a remark on yours in particular).

There are a few that seem only so-so to me... 3,7 and 9 as examples... but I'm also only moderately behind numbers 4 and 5.

I really like 2,6 and 8... though I'd have preferred the upright bass (not a
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+1 for first one. It's an attention catcher, you were spot on and it makes me want to have a romantic dinner with candle + wine...she will love it!



Jun 13, 2008 at 07:22 AM





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