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Archive 2008 · #49: Fem curves

Leon Noel
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p.1 #1 · #49: Fem curves

My first WA so I'd love to hear C&C.

Finally managed to lure my GF into devoting to art because I thought it would fit the theme

. That was the hardest part.

Technique wise there's not much, shot with Nikkor AIS 28/2.8 on Canon 5D, room quite dimly lit at the time, fluorescent ceiling lamp and a desk lamp on the floor.


	http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q69/Blknoel/IMG_5501.jpg

Thanks for watching and I hope to receive support.

Edit: realised there's another author using "curves" as title so I changed mine to something else

Edited on Apr 26, 2008 at 03:26 PM

Apr 26, 2008 at 03:23 PM

Adam Woodyatt 1-time assignment winner

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p.1 #2 · #49: Fem curves

Like the treatment and concept.
Not sure about the strands of hair, just skin would have been my preference.
Good luck.

Adam

Apr 28, 2008 at 08:37 AM

Leon Noel
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p.1 #3 · #49: Fem curves

I completely agree and that was what I desired when looking at the pic, but I'm not sure I could push my "Photoshop skills" too far. :P

Thanks for you thought, there's still time, I'll see what I can do.

Apr 28, 2008 at 11:05 AM

Leon Noel
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p.1 #4 · #49: Fem curves

Here's the "Midas touched" edited version, if there's enough positive feedbacks I'll switch it to be main entry.

This place is so barren though, nothing like WA.

http://i133.photobucket.com/albums/q69/Blknoel/Edited3.jpg

Edited on Apr 28, 2008 at 01:14 PM

Apr 28, 2008 at 01:13 PM

Adam Woodyatt 1-time assignment winner

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p.1 #5 · #49: Fem curves

MA can be a bit quiet but I like it...

I think that makes it too tight, have you got a version with her whole head, if we are going to see her hair lets see all of it.

Midas looks good, reminds me of 007.

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Edited on Apr 28, 2008 at 05:03 PM

Apr 28, 2008 at 05:02 PM

Leon Noel
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p.1 #6 · #49: Fem curves

The painful thing is I didn't frame in her head.

But since the theme is about curve, I don't think the inclusion of the head plays a vital role, this way you focus more on the lines. The current frame gives me the impression of an abstract, which I think is suitable.

Don't you feel the same way?

Apr 28, 2008 at 07:26 PM

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p.1 #7 · #49: Fem curves

I like the first one the best.

May 08, 2008 at 10:11 PM

Chad Schulz 1-time assignment winner

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p.1 #8 · #49: Fem curves

Love the perspective and concept. I think it needs some post-processing work to remove the hair and smooth the skin, enhancing the curves.

Good luck,
Chad

May 16, 2008 at 12:45 AM


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