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TimothyAllen
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p.1 #1 · #290: The end of the tunnel


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Apr 15, 2008 at 07:31 AM
Steven Roberts
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p.1 #2 · #290: The end of the tunnel


Oh man. Would hate to be in that situation. Definitely the end. Feels a bit dark overall to me and may take away from some of the effect. Not sure, but the concept. Wow

Steve R



Apr 15, 2008 at 02:34 PM
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p.1 #3 · #290: The end of the tunnel


Kinda terrifying.

Not sure about some of the greys, they lack a bit of tonal depth - which might have been the look you were going for, but reduces the drama somewhat...

...but I drink lead paint.



Apr 15, 2008 at 04:30 PM
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p.1 #4 · #290: The end of the tunnel


It is an HO scale train in a scale tunnel, so lighting was suboptimal. I did want it dark, but I could only control the tonal depth so much. The train's light was kind of bright for the tunnel. Thanks for the feedback.


Apr 15, 2008 at 06:35 PM
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p.1 #5 · #290: The end of the tunnel


Hi Timothy,

I really like the idea and you have done a good job of pulling it off. Perhaps a bit too much dynamic range in the shot. Have you thought about blending two exposures? Just a thought. I still like the shot a lot. Good luck this week.

Steve S.



Apr 15, 2008 at 09:33 PM





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