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a. http://www.lindabrowne.com/cards/Image24.jpg


b. http://www.lindabrowne.com/cards/Image32.jpg


note: these are rough drafts, photos/colours subject to change and details need to be cleaned up. (domain not currently live)

Update: down to the final two. Text re-worked on B.

Edited by Linda Browne on Apr 06, 2008 at 11:42 PM GMT

Edited on Apr 07, 2008 at 01:42 AM



Apr 06, 2008 at 12:10 PM
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p.1 #2 · business card - final 2


Number a. is by far the best. The panoramic look sensational. Nice layout too.

I would not use any of the color shots, not on par with the black and whites you show here.

Edited by Chris Fawkes on Apr 07, 2008 at 04:53 AM GMT

Edited by Chris Fawkes on Apr 07, 2008 at 07:37 AM GMT

Edited on Apr 07, 2008 at 02:37 AM



Apr 06, 2008 at 12:30 PM
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p.1 #3 · business card - final 2


Chris, did you mean #3 with the grey background or #4 with the black. I added arrows in. The grey seems blah to me, but I know I don't have an objective eye.

I added #8, which shows that layout with color.

The reason I'm leaning towards a strong color is to have it stand out enough to get peoples attention. I'd rather have it be a little gaudy and be picked up than to have it ignored. I'm trying to keep the potential clients in mind and not my personal preference.

And if anyone REALLY feels I'm shooting my self in the foot by not hiring a graphic designer, feel free to speak up.



Apr 06, 2008 at 01:11 PM
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p.1 #4 · business card - final 2


#4


Apr 06, 2008 at 01:13 PM
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Although no photography pro, I have designed my share of business cards and have taken part in numerous marketing workshops. The number one reason people hang onto a business card is because they've used the back to write something they don't want to lose. It's true that some of your fans will keep the cards regardless.

I can't tell you the number of times I've looked through all the business cards that have collected on my desk and ended up putting some back in my wallet because I wrote something I needed on the back.

For that reason, I'd choose 4 with the white, non-gloss back.

-Carraig



Apr 06, 2008 at 01:54 PM
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p.1 #6 · business card - final 2


Thanks, Carraig. You have a great point there. I've done the same thing!

Narrowed it down to:

card #1, 2 or 3.
Option B: one of those layouts with a different photo.
Option C: take another crack at a new design.
Option D: hire a professional.

Edited on Apr 06, 2008 at 03:37 PM



Apr 06, 2008 at 03:28 PM
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On the Update:

3!!

I like bucking the tradition of "balance", so three stands out simply because it doesn't have the black across the top AND bottom.

And I looove the image... I wouldn't change it!



Apr 06, 2008 at 05:15 PM
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carraig wrote:
Although no photography pro, I have designed my share of business cards and have taken part in numerous marketing workshops. The number one reason people hang onto a business card is because they've used the back to write something they don't want to lose. It's true that some of your fans will keep the cards regardless.

I can't tell you the number of times I've looked through all the business cards that have collected on my desk and ended up putting some back in my wallet because I wrote something I needed on the back.

For that reason, I'd choose 4 with
...Show more

I like #3. This is great advice. People will hold onto your business card out of a stack if YOU right something on the back, like your Cell-phone or a "special number" which people can reach you at. I need to do this more, but it's very effective.

Just remembering some of the mixers I've been too and sorted out some of the cards I was going to toss away, I can recall now keeping the 1 or 2 on which people had written an email or something on it. Makes it feel like "you cant lose this info".



Apr 06, 2008 at 07:21 PM
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Of the three that I see currently posted, I like the last one the best. But something that bugs me about all three is the rule between the name and the domain/phone number - it's much too tight in there - you can probably drop that rule entirely, and open the space between everything just a little bit.


Apr 06, 2008 at 09:51 PM
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Linda, I like 3 as well. The image is powerful. Yvette


Apr 06, 2008 at 10:05 PM
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The black definately makes the image stand out and the last image looks like the card is two halves image top and design bottom whereas a. the entire thing works together for a more visualy pleasing look.

Edited by Chris Fawkes on Apr 07, 2008 at 07:38 AM GMT

Edited on Apr 07, 2008 at 02:38 AM



Apr 07, 2008 at 12:02 AM
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I've updated the list down to two and changed up the text on B.

Final vote and comments, please!

It's been mentioned that the name is hard to read, but I think I'm okay with that since I really like that font and they can remember the business name/url. I've tried upteen other fonts for my name and haven't come up with anything else that I like. Again though, I'm not objective. Input welcome.



Apr 07, 2008 at 01:51 AM
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Of the 2 I like A better.

I like B's layout more, but I find the font to be too busy. Too many font size's. I'd change your name font so that it's the same size and style as "photography by..." If you changed that I would vote for this one.

I also think A would look better with the same name font suggestion and bringing the domain and phone number below the picture. (BTW which I don't know if you noticed is off centre)

Your name is important, why put it on there if people have a hard time reading it. I would have a hard time reading it if I didn't see your user name here on FM.

As others have suggested, keep the picture, it fit's well with the cards style



Apr 07, 2008 at 06:22 AM
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a


Apr 07, 2008 at 06:50 AM
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sboerup wrote:
I like #3. This is great advice. People will hold onto your business card out of a stack if YOU right something on the back, like your Cell-phone or a "special number" which people can reach you at. I need to do this more, but it's very effective.

Just remembering some of the mixers I've been too and sorted out some of the cards I was going to toss away, I can recall now keeping the 1 or 2 on which people had written an email or something on it. Makes it feel like "you cant lose this info".


That's a great point Spencer. Back in the day when i sold cars I would use that to my benefit. I had some business cards I deliberately made with my office phone only. Then, when I would give a card to someone I would say something along the lines of "I'll tell you what. Even though it's not listed on the card, I'll go ahead and write my cell phone number on the back to ensure you can reach me any time." or something along those lines.

It will make your client feel special, and because they have "secret" information they're not liable to throw the card out.

Just an idea...
-Carraig



Apr 07, 2008 at 10:27 AM
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B.

~Sam



Apr 07, 2008 at 06:00 PM
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Thanks for all the input. It's been very helpful!

Personally I like the second one better, but I'm going to use the first one. It'll work better for a display sign at a bridal stroll and I want that to be the same as my business cards. I'm going to keep the signature font but went with plain text on my postcards. Funny thing is, if I used my actual signature, there wouldn't be anyone would could ever read it, even if they knew me! At least the script is an improvement over that.



Apr 11, 2008 at 01:25 AM
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A


Apr 11, 2008 at 09:36 AM
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p.1 #19 · business card - final 2


+1 for B


Apr 11, 2008 at 10:03 AM
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A


Apr 11, 2008 at 10:08 AM
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