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Kaden K.
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p.1 #1 · Horse

Hasselblad 503 CW, Agfacolor Optima 100 [C41]

Apr 01, 2008 at 07:31 AM

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Kaden,
Is there something specific you are looking for in a critique of this image?
Scott G

Apr 01, 2008 at 01:32 PM

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I am looking for feedback on the overall look of the image. Obviously the art piece in
exhibit on this gallery is a dead horse.

Apr 01, 2008 at 01:58 PM

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p.1 #4 · Horse

So, without beating a dead horse and commenting on a somewhat wooden, lifeless subject.....

I'm not on a good monitor. Please keep that in mind.
I like the tones in this image, especially the relationship between the horse tones and the wall behind it. Seems like this image could also work as a toned BW. A bit heavy on the contrast for my taste, at least on this monitor. Appears to be some loss of detail under the saddle. Since you are shooting film, I'm thinking this relates either to the scan or, more likely, to the web conversion and down-sizing for web. Crop seems a bit tight at the rear hoofs, ears.
Hope this is helpful.
Scott

Apr 01, 2008 at 03:07 PM

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p.1 #5 · Horse

Too soft, too tight, too confusing between background and central object.

The mood is good - I think it just needs better composition.

Apr 04, 2008 at 01:56 AM


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