Archive 2008 · Portrait Critique

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p.1 #1 · Portrait Critique

Friend took this shot of me. I'm not sure if the dials and guages are too busy. I'd hate to crop them out because I think it gives the picture its ambiance. I tried to bring myself out in the B&W conversion. Any C&C welcome.


	http://photos.rpsommers.com/photos/266535672_hQCu9-M.jpg

Mar 16, 2008 at 08:00 PM

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p.1 #2 · Portrait Critique

I think it is pretty good . The sepia is a good add.

You might consider cropping off the left side to elbow so as to be less busy and less centred.

Next time I suggest using a fill flash which will darken the background behind him and make him stand out more.

Mar 16, 2008 at 09:09 PM

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p.1 #3 · Portrait Critique

And try to get away from the hanger's corrugated siding for the BG.

I'm envious...

Bob

Mar 20, 2008 at 07:36 AM

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p.1 #4 · Portrait Critique

I really like this image.
I wouldnt crop it. I think the context is well-captured, not too busy. I'm immediately drawn to the warm smile and feel engaged with subject, looking right at the camera. Toning is excellent; pleasant, not too intense.
Scott G

Mar 20, 2008 at 08:58 AM

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p.1 #5 · Portrait Critique

my eye is drawn to the right, to the front of the airplane window by the diagonal frame, which isn't what your looking for.

I agree the fill flash would have helped... but take this for what it's worth, i'm no pro.

Mar 20, 2008 at 07:26 PM


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