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p.2 #1 · Veronika with hommade ringflash

Thanks to all of you!

@george malamis: thanks for the tip about the pupils...

Feb 29, 2008 at 08:13 AM

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p.2 #2 · Veronika with hommade ringflash

#1 & #3 are great -just fix those catchlights!

But I have a problem with #2. Where's her body? Where are her legs? It looks like a magic trick.

Feb 29, 2008 at 08:59 AM

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p.2 #3 · Veronika with hommade ringflash

Love the lips on 3, but the missing legs on 2 spoil it for me.

Mar 01, 2008 at 05:10 AM

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p.2 #4 · Veronika with hommade ringflash

great job on the pics Jure - but save yourself the trouble on the ring flash and get one of these: http://www.flaghead.co.uk/pages/ringflash-intro.html
BTW - they now have a US distributor for anyone in the US who's interested: ringflash@expoimaging.net

Edited by 24Peter on Mar 03, 2008 at 09:22 PM GMT

Edited on Mar 04, 2008 at 05:22 AM

Mar 01, 2008 at 05:21 AM

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p.2 #5 · Veronika with hommade ringflash

Thanks for the comments...I didnt notice the problem with her legs before, but now it really is starting to bother me. I really got some great tips here!

Peter, thanks for the link, I hope I can find it somewhere in Europe...

Mar 03, 2008 at 10:23 AM

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p.2 #6 · Veronika with hommade ringflash

My CC

A long long time ago I apprenticed with an old master. One of his pearls of wisdom were, "make it look natural". In this case, make the catch lights look natural to how the face is lit and unfortunately they are not. I think you'd get more impact by replacing the distracting ring light catch light with the one you have used but keep the original position. The brain detects the oddity when you move it and the shadows don't match.

Mar 04, 2008 at 01:27 AM

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p.2 #7 · Veronika with hommade ringflash

Love all of them, great work

mark

Mar 04, 2008 at 04:06 AM

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