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Chad Schulz
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · #47: I Hate Mornings


Had this idea kickin' around in my head for weeks. Procrastinated on doing it until the last minute Now I have no time to improve it so I hope it's at least presentable

C&C welcome, as always.
Chad

Edited by Chad Schulz on Feb 16, 2008 at 11:28 PM GMT (Reason: Went with the tighter cropped version.)







Edited on Feb 17, 2008 at 05:28 AM



Feb 15, 2008 at 09:00 PM
Adam Woodyatt
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · #47: I Hate Mornings


Face needs a more grumpy expression, maybe one eye open one shut, and maybe have the focus on the Alarm instead.

Made me laugh all the same.

Adam



Feb 15, 2008 at 09:22 PM
Chad Schulz
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · #47: I Hate Mornings


Adam Woodyatt wrote:
Face needs a more grumpy expression, maybe one eye open one shut, and maybe have the focus on the Alarm instead.

Made me laugh all the same.

Adam


Hate's a powerful thing. And I didn't want to take this photo either down a dark or a campy path. So the expression on my face is one of honesty.

The focus is on the alarm. The big problem, and one that I now cannot correct in time, is the fact that with the bell ringing, the entire alarm shakes.

Either way, even though I agree with much that you say, I can't fix the shot before the deadline at midnight.

Thanks Adam for the C&C,
Chad



Feb 15, 2008 at 10:42 PM
 

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · #47: I Hate Mornings


It's tough to choose which crop on this one. The tighter one focuses more on the eye saying "You've got to be kidding, it can't be time to get up!" The first image makes the observer feel more of an overall tired feeling of the subject by showing the pjs and well slept on pillow. Great image either way! I like the color! And the beard growth! Maybe just a bit sleepier looking eye. Nicely done!

Jamie



Feb 16, 2008 at 07:27 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · #47: I Hate Mornings


I like #2...says it all and says it well.


Feb 17, 2008 at 03:18 AM
Karen Gilligan
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · #47: I Hate Mornings


Chad,

Nicely done. I love the tones you chose for this. I did not get an opportunity to see the two different crops but like what you have posted.

Good Luck.

Karen



Feb 18, 2008 at 03:48 AM







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