The picture is good. The framed through the bottom of her arm on right seems off. I think it needs the arm moved to her knee. To fix a bit i would crop a bit higher on her arm.
I would also try to get the hotspot off her right shoulder. It competes with her right eye.
Also, her left arm is partially in the shade from her torso, but partially not. Take a bit of time and figure out what you want to show with her arms. Right now, they are just distractions from her facial expression.
