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Hello. I'm a new poster, with a new camera and a new interest in photography.
I thought I would try to do something for the weekly assignment.
I welcome all comments.

Image TItle - "Evolution"

Edited on Feb 04, 2008 at 03:59 AM

Feb 04, 2008 at 03:58 AM

mark nicoll
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p.1 #2 · 1st Post - Help with WA

Great idea like it a lot . only thing i would change is the left hand candle for some tinder. That then would be true evolution fire through to candle through to bulb
Best of luck and see you in the WA
Take care
Mark

Feb 04, 2008 at 05:55 AM

Scott Stoness
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p.1 #3 · 1st Post - Help with WA

Good idea from Mark.

In addition, have the items rising in level to show the evolution, is my suggestion.

Feb 04, 2008 at 10:23 PM

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p.1 #4 · 1st Post - Help with WA

Thanks for the comments.

I considered "tinder" but was a little worried about starting an actual fire inside the house. I may try it and see what happens.

By the way, I actually ended up submitting a different idea for the WA.

Thanks again.

Feb 05, 2008 at 01:49 PM

James Grimm
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p.1 #5 · 1st Post - Help with WA

Eager,

Nice idea, but the candles and bulb are not really integrated into a single image. I recommend finding a way to make this idea into something more cohesive.

Good luck.

-James

Feb 05, 2008 at 09:14 PM


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