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I don't see any way in which I could improve that image, Jeff. But if it helps, I prefer the second with the profile in mono and the foreground Viper in color.
To me it feels like the head-on fighter is the real airplane since it's complete and matches the rest of the image, and the profile is a memory or a thought since it's incomplete and only occupies part of the image. Based on that mentality (intuitive, not reasoned) it seems more "accurate" to have the real aircraft be in color and the thought/memory be in mono.