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Archive 2007 · #275 Missing You

  
 
Mark Meeks
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This is my first time posting in a weekly assignment. I know I won't be competitive, but you've got to start somewhere I suppose. Any critiques or suggestions will be appreciated.

http://markameeks.zenfolio.com/img/v3/p157355227.jpg



Dec 10, 2007 at 06:50 AM
Steve Spencer
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Hi Mark,

This is a very nice shot. Glad you decide to enter the WA. I think the selective color works here as it captures a dream or dream-like moment. Good luck this week,

Steve S.



Dec 10, 2007 at 10:01 AM
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Nice idea Mark, a very nice start.

On a technical note, I find the lighter area above her hair a little distracting. Maybe it would benefit from having a little cropped off the top?

Jason



Dec 10, 2007 at 12:16 PM
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I think it's a nice start too Mark !
I agree with Jason about the crop and I'm not sure about the selective color in this image. It's like telling an evidence for me here...

Good image nonetheless.

Julien



Dec 10, 2007 at 07:13 PM





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