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Mark Meeks
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p.1 #1 · #275 Missing You

This is my first time posting in a weekly assignment. I know I won't be competitive, but you've got to start somewhere I suppose. Any critiques or suggestions will be appreciated.

Edited on Dec 11, 2007 at 12:13 AM

Dec 10, 2007 at 11:50 AM

Steve Spencer
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p.1 #2 · #275 Missing You

Hi Mark,

This is a very nice shot. Glad you decide to enter the WA. I think the selective color works here as it captures a dream or dream-like moment. Good luck this week,

Steve S.

Edited on Dec 11, 2007 at 12:13 AM

Dec 10, 2007 at 03:01 PM

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p.1 #3 · #275 Missing You

Nice idea Mark, a very nice start.

On a technical note, I find the lighter area above her hair a little distracting. Maybe it would benefit from having a little cropped off the top?

Jason

Edited on Dec 11, 2007 at 12:13 AM

Dec 10, 2007 at 05:16 PM

markoner
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p.1 #4 · #275 Missing You

I think it's a nice start too Mark !
I agree with Jason about the crop and I'm not sure about the selective color in this image. It's like telling an evidence for me here...

Good image nonetheless.

Julien

Dec 11, 2007 at 12:13 AM


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