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Doug Click
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p.1 #1 · wine bottles

I posted this in another form but got no comments. I thought I would post it here to see what your thoughts/opinions are. I am not sure if I like this photo or not. Do you think it is a "keeper"?

Edited on Nov 25, 2007 at 05:28 PM

Nov 23, 2007 at 02:11 PM

Scott Stoness
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p.1 #2 · wine bottles

I think it needs work. It looks like it has been cropped. Can you show what you started from.

The challenges for me are:
It is a bit square
It is too tight on top between cork and frame
The brown table below is distracting
The bottles tilt in because you shot from a low perspective.
There is too much reflection in the bottles.

Anyway, I think if you have more space on right (left has more reflection) I would crop with one or two bottles, less space on bottom, more on top, and much more space to right.

Otherwise I would reshoot with one bottle. It is a good idea and I like the depth and colors in the picture.

Edited on Nov 25, 2007 at 05:28 PM

Nov 24, 2007 at 04:57 PM

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p.1 #3 · wine bottles

I don't like the wide zoom rendering the bottles leaning

Nov 25, 2007 at 05:28 PM


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