Karl Witt Offline Upload & Sell: On
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First one Stephen has pleasing colors and detail.
The second shows nice tonal graduations on the feathering colors.
As far as comp on #1, and this is merely to suggest you take a 2nd look at it, has a lot of dead space on the left. The subject is centered (a bit too centered IMO) and is looking to the right.
As a suggestion, move subject to the left and slightly up, minimize the intrusion of upper branch and see what 'you' think Use the 'eyes' of the bird for a guide in composition...............
Nice presentation overall.
Karl
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