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Comments and critiques are welcome! Thanks,







Nov 10, 2017 at 06:13 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Foliage, lake, and kid


welcome to FM

Beautiful scene and nice foliage....more than I have seen this year in New England.

Image appears to be tilted down to the left
Colors are over-saturated to my eye and the sky color appears to have been shifted a bit
Possible artifactual banding around the tree line vs a smudge of clouds
Sharpness, detail, comp look good to me.

Scott



Nov 10, 2017 at 06:27 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Foliage, lake, and kid


Beautiful colors....you could adjust the sky a bit to look more natural and straighten the image. I would crop the right side to get rid of the pipe and the boat. This would keep the subject on the child fishing


Nov 10, 2017 at 06:46 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Foliage, lake, and kid


Great image, other than the sky issues mentioned above.


Nov 10, 2017 at 10:57 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Foliage, lake, and kid


Level, crop and S&P on the color.

Still not quite , but you get the gist on the direction.







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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Foliage, lake, and kid


I like the crop to remove distractions at right, but I would like to see the water and sky a bit more as in your first take...let them reflect each other and let the solo figure, reflection, and ripples "breathe". In particular, having relatable "depth in both water and sky I think would balance nicely.
Beautiful scene and image.



Nov 11, 2017 at 05:50 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Foliage, lake, and kid


Thank you all for your suggestions, especial for RustyBug for your re-touching.


Nov 11, 2017 at 08:36 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Foliage, lake, and kid


It's a very evocative scene. You might consider a tighter crop to better focus on the message of the scene.












Nov 11, 2017 at 09:20 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Foliage, lake, and kid


Thank AuntiPode for your creative re-touching.


Nov 13, 2017 at 04:39 PM
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Really do like the saturated colors. Fall's, indeed, in the air.


Nov 13, 2017 at 05:33 PM







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