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Does this work? All comments and critiques welcome.









Nov 07, 2017 at 10:57 PM
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It works for me! Looks like a nice relaxing day at the lake. I like the little hint of dynamics with the right fishing pole and what appears to be some fish jumping.

The symmetry of you comp also works for me which plays well with the matching chairs.

Dave



Nov 08, 2017 at 07:04 PM
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To me there is something "off" about the pic. I can't quite put my hands on it, but I think it might have too much detail beyond the fishermen.

Hasty rework below shows more what my eyes were looking for.

Jeff







Nov 09, 2017 at 12:27 AM
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beavens wrote:
To me there is something "off" about the pic. I can't quite put my hands on it, but I think it might have too much detail beyond the fishermen.

Hasty rework below shows more what my eyes were looking for.

Jeff


Jeff,

It does make for a different and very nice composition but I may still be too attached to the scenery to let it go. lol

Steve




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steve_a_reno wrote:
Jeff,

It does make for a different and very nice composition but I may still be too attached to the scenery to let it go. lol

Steve



Your pic. Your message. Your call.



Jeff



Nov 09, 2017 at 11:26 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Lazy Lake


nicely done
does it improve slightly with a crop from the right at the last V in the water/skyline? My eye gets drawn there

Scott



Nov 10, 2017 at 01:55 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Lazy Lake


sbeme wrote:
nicely done
does it improve slightly with a crop from the right at the last V in the water/skyline? My eye gets drawn there

Scott


I can see that. Will try a crop and see if it works any better. Thanks.



Nov 15, 2017 at 10:47 PM







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