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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Winging It


Ok...round 2 of my quest to improve my BIF chops




Nov 07, 2017 at 05:02 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Winging It


Maybe a slight "L" trim off the bottom & right to reduce the mass of the competing bright grass.
(Might need some off the top to re-balance afterwards.)

Otherwise ... looking good, imo.



Nov 07, 2017 at 12:45 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Winging It


Can you recover any detail from the RAW file in that blown area of the wing?


Nov 07, 2017 at 02:37 PM
 

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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Winging It


I'd say you are getting the hang of this BIF thing pretty quickly! Nice job.

+1 with all the above and maybe bump the exposure up just a smidgen.

And keep in mind you're in the PC forum so don't let all the critique make you think you're not nailing it. Just simply room for improvements on an already nice shot in which to learn more from.


Dave



Nov 07, 2017 at 03:32 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Winging It


White birds are a tough gig. I think you have a grey cast in the white. Otherwise I have nothing to add to the other good suggestions, and excellent shot as Dave says, consider where you are.


Nov 07, 2017 at 05:57 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Winging It


Bump up the exposure and shadows some, recover some highlight detail and you've got a pretty solid BIF shot.

Great wing to wing detail. Next up will be getting the right situation for that perfect creamy background.

Jeff



Nov 09, 2017 at 12:32 AM







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