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Your comments and critiques welcome.

Steve




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Nov 02, 2017 at 03:12 AM
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This is pretty kickass, Steve! I like the over the top processing - maybe boost Clarity to get more grit in there? Loving the bright, contrasty, vibrant colors. Shadow is an extra nice catch - especially the angle.

Maybe try to create a little separation somehow with the black leg on black background? I could take or leave the right side beyond the pole.

Jeff



Nov 02, 2017 at 03:20 AM
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beavens wrote:
This is pretty kickass, Steve! I like the over the top processing - maybe boost Clarity to get more grit in there? Loving the bright, contrasty, vibrant colors. Shadow is an extra nice catch - especially the angle.

Maybe try to create a little separation somehow with the black leg on black background? I could take or leave the right side beyond the pole.

Jeff


Thanks Jeff for your comments and suggestion. The right side of the image presented a dilemma as it is quiet and fairly uninteresting as opposed to the rest of the image. I experimented with lightening the shadow to the right and above, but felt it lessened the effectiveness of the framing I was going for. I could have also cropped off a bit of the right side without losing anything, but I don't like to tamper too much with normal crop ratios. When I see odd ratios it leaves me wondering what "blemishes"the photographer may be trying to hide.

Steve



Nov 02, 2017 at 12:44 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Love 8


Steve, at first upon viewing I had some suggestive criticisms enter my mind but upon more "eyeballing", I found grace, different dimensions to your image that made me smile. Great job. I love "wall art". You have intertwined many photographic effects into a wonderful image to view!
Dan



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Danpbphoto wrote:
Steve, at first upon viewing I had some suggestive criticisms enter my mind but upon more "eyeballing", I found grace, different dimensions to your image that made me smile. Great job. I love "wall art". You have intertwined many photographic effects into a wonderful image to view!
Dan


Thanks Dan!

Steve



Nov 02, 2017 at 01:23 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Love 8


Much to look at here Steve. The way the shadow of the roof highlights the poster girl. How the poster girls lips are ready to plant a kiss one the real girl shadow head. The brown jacket, the dark brown shiny leg.

This is an eye catcher.



Nov 02, 2017 at 07:55 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Love 8


Interesting. My eye went from the wheatpaste poster art over to the fuzzy jacket then to the shadow of the girl. i didnt even notice the "Loves" bit. There is a lot of stuff going on in this frame - I'm not sure what I make of it. I would love to see this as a high contrast BW photo, maybe even burn off the right side shadows so we have a hyper focus on the center?
Cool photo, thanks!



Nov 03, 2017 at 05:10 AM







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