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Your comments and critiques welcome.

Steve




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Oct 09, 2017 at 10:25 PM
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Great illustration of having a product just when it's needed! Good capture Steve, I might have backed up a little to get the whole cart/stool in frame.
Douglas



Oct 10, 2017 at 07:37 AM
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douter wrote:
Great illustration of having a product just when it's needed! Good capture Steve, I might have backed up a little to get the whole cart/stool in frame.
Douglas


Thanks Douglas, and appreciate your suggestion. I'll play with the cropping. I did heavily crop this when I processed it as there were extraneous things going on at the fringes that I wanted to eliminate. I also wanted to key in on him counting his money which wasn't as noticeable in the original crop.

Steve



Oct 10, 2017 at 07:52 AM
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Being at the right place at the right time. Nice shot. I don't know what lies beyond the edges, but for some reason I want to see all of the umbrellas you cropped off the left and right sides (especially the right side). But perhaps that makes the money too small.


Oct 10, 2017 at 09:11 AM
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DaleBerlin wrote:
Being at the right place at the right time. Nice shot. I don't know what lies beyond the edges, but for some reason I want to see all of the umbrellas you cropped off the left and right sides (especially the right side). But perhaps that makes the money too small.


Hey Dale, will repost tonight with additional detail as suggested.

Steve



Oct 10, 2017 at 09:25 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Cleaning Up In The Rain


My first thought was where is his umbrella? Maybe out of the frame?


Oct 10, 2017 at 03:18 PM
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ben egbert wrote:
My first thought was where is his umbrella? Maybe out of the frame?


Maybe hard to see, but he's holding it, clenched under his left arm.

Steve



Oct 10, 2017 at 03:56 PM
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douter wrote:
Great illustration of having a product just when it's needed! Good capture Steve, I might have backed up a little to get the whole cart/stool in frame.
Douglas


At your suggestion, showing the whole scene.

Steve




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Oct 10, 2017 at 08:23 PM
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Thanks. Two totally different images. I like the 1st one better despite the umbrellas being cut off lol.


Oct 10, 2017 at 09:57 PM
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Steve, for me the second is cleaner and I prefer his expression in the second, wider version. The 2nd must have been at least one frame earlier as the pedestrian is not clearly in view.
Different eyes see different things!
Douglas



Oct 11, 2017 at 06:01 AM
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douter wrote:
Steve, for me the second is cleaner and I prefer his expression in the second, wider version. The 2nd must have been at least one frame earlier as the pedestrian is not clearly in view.
Different eyes see different things!
Douglas


Thanks Dale and Douglas for your feedback.

Steve



Oct 11, 2017 at 07:17 AM





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