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pixlepeeper wrote:
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This young lady was sitting on a bench in a park and I just went up to her and told her I wanted to take her portrait. I believe she did an amazing job of posing. 85mm lens.
Many things to love about this portrait. A very pretty lady, and you've captured her warm and winning smile. Nicely blurred background. Much credit to you for approaching her and asking permission to take her portrait. Did you offer to send her a copy? I always get their email address.
A few suggestions to taste. I prefer a different crop to remove her from the middle of the frame to make the image less static. Also, she shows with a long neck, so I've cropped slightly to reduce that. I"ve added a little contrast. Last, the teeth look over whitened. I'm not sure if that's a by product of your conversion, or from post processing. You might consider toning that down a little.
Steve
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