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Bob Jarman
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Couple color chromes


Thoughts?

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Sep 26, 2017 at 08:13 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Couple color chromes


I think #1 & 3 work no matter what or how you choose to present them. They are fantastic captures IMHO.

#2 nope. Not working for me at all. The face cut in half and the funky processing artifacts along the right edge hurt it too much to have any love for that one.
Perhaps if you cropped down from the top to just below the man's waist and then cleaned up the remaining artifacts? This would make it a little more intimate and direct the viewer to the child.

just my 2

Dave



Sep 26, 2017 at 03:08 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Couple color chromes


I agree with Dave here, 1 and 3 are super.


Sep 26, 2017 at 05:34 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Couple color chromes


lighthound wrote:
I think #1 & 3 work no matter what or how you choose to present them. They are fantastic captures IMHO.

#2 nope. Not working for me at all. The face cut in half and the funky processing artifacts along the right edge hurt it too much to have any love for that one.
Perhaps if you cropped down from the top to just below the man's waist and then cleaned up the remaining artifacts? This would make it a little more intimate and direct the viewer to the child.

just my 2

Dave


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ben egbert wrote:
I agree with Dave here, 1 and 3 are super.


Thanks Dave, Ben,

Yup, #2 won't make the cut. Too bad, a good opportunity missed

I appreciate your thoughts. I believe the artifacts are mottling on wall paper

Bob



Sep 27, 2017 at 01:38 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Couple color chromes


Bob, that 1st one is very cool. I love the intrigue. Is it a birthday party? What are they looking at? Why did they stop eating and jump under the table? I wouldn't change a dang thing on it.

In the 2nd image, Im not a big fan of cutting a person's head in half.

I really like the 3rd too. That expression is priceless. I might crop a little off the left to get the boy off center.

Cheers
Dale



Sep 27, 2017 at 12:30 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Couple color chromes


Perhaps a tighter crop to tighten the message for the first?






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Sep 27, 2017 at 02:52 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Couple color chromes


For the second, perhaps a bit of a crop and some color tweaks?







Sep 27, 2017 at 03:06 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Couple color chromes


AuntiPode wrote:
Perhaps a tighter crop to tighten the message for the first?


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AuntiPode wrote:
For the second, perhaps a bit of a crop and some color tweaks?


Thanks Karen,

Does provide a different flavor.

Best,

Bob



Sep 28, 2017 at 03:59 AM





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