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Very nice set... here are some detailed thoughts:
(1) a brush thru the hair would have made this shot better. a few flyaways are ok, but her hair is too mussy and detracts the eyes
(2) nice! wouldn't change anything about this one
(3) you have chopped her at the knees and have excessive head room. no problem cropping at bottom, but when there is too much headroom, it gives the viewer a feeling that the camera was tipped down too much.
(4) a bit of a strange hand position... scratching head like... duh (if that makes sense). not a huge deal, but that was my first thought
(5) nice.
Would like to see a smile in the set
HTH for your next shoot
greg
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