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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Stormy Cay


Just after some showers blew thru

Scott



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Sep 24, 2017 at 09:16 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Stormy Cay


Self-critique, then.


Sky is great.
Some foreground interest but mid-image lacking interest.
A bit busy.

Your turn

Scott



Sep 25, 2017 at 05:50 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Stormy Cay


Really nice effort. But I can't help wondering what the color version would look like.

Kelly



Sep 26, 2017 at 02:23 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Stormy Cay


Self-critique is pretty spot on. I will add a few thoughts for what they are worth.

The sky is great but I'd try to recover the blown areas if possible.

Depth, I lose all sense of depth once I reach the bird. It might be just my eyes but to me, from the bird all the way back, almost looks like it's on the same plane if you will.

Lastly is the selfie shadow. 2 steps to the left could have eliminated that photo bomber.

Dave



Sep 26, 2017 at 03:18 PM





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