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Your comments and critiques welcome.

Steve




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Sep 21, 2017 at 11:18 AM
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Nice capture! I'm not sure about the open mouth as that's not flattering but I think it adds to his expression.

Here's my quick hack edit correcting a few things that jumped out at me.
1) exposure seems very low
2) Tilt definitely doesn't work for me on this one.

Just my few pennies.

Dave







Sep 21, 2017 at 12:23 PM
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I like it, but on a smaller screen, it threw me for a loop. Don't laugh, but when I first looked at it, was wondering why he had three legs. Saw the crossed leg, then saw the two sneakers, and enough loose pants to seem as if there was the possibility of three legs.

OK, I'll wander off quietly now and take my meds...



Sep 21, 2017 at 01:56 PM
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Ha, I also saw three feet at first. I like dave's edit.


Sep 21, 2017 at 06:52 PM
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lighthound wrote:
Nice capture! I'm not sure about the open mouth as that's not flattering but I think it adds to his expression.

Here's my quick hack edit correcting a few things that jumped out at me.
1) exposure seems very low
2) Tilt definitely doesn't work for me on this one.

Just my few pennies.

Dave


Appreciate your suggestions Dave, always. I've been sloppy lately on fixing the tilt. Re: mouth, he's airing his foot and his mouth at the same time.

Steve



Sep 21, 2017 at 08:10 PM
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ben egbert wrote:
Ha, I also saw three feet at first. I like dave's edit.


Fred and Ben, now that you mention it, I do see three feet.

Steve



Sep 21, 2017 at 08:11 PM
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eeneryma wrote:

I've been sloppy lately on fixing the tilt.


Cull hard ... lest you alter your reputation.







Sep 21, 2017 at 09:50 PM
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RustyBug wrote:
Cull hard ... lest you alter your reputation.





Good advice, well received.



Sep 22, 2017 at 07:37 AM
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RustyBug wrote:
Cull hard ... lest you alter your reputation.





That thar is whatcha call tough love Steve.


It's hurts to hear it sometimes (ok most times) but the honesty we receive from Kent, Scott, Karen, yourself and others does help make PC the wonderful resource that it is.

Like my momma always use to tell me....
"Ain't nothin like a good bitch slapping once in awhile."

Yeah, she never said that. I just thought I might try to inject a little light hearted humor here.

Dave



Sep 22, 2017 at 09:24 AM
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Just meant as a helpful nudge ... then I got way too wordy (for those who saw the earlier version).

Thankfully, Steve likely knows my heart is in his camp all the way.



Sep 22, 2017 at 01:15 PM
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RustyBug wrote:
Just meant as a helpful nudge ... then I got way too wordy (for those who saw the earlier version).

Thankfully, Steve likely knows my heart is in his camp all the way.


Among hearts, yours is enormous and always well intentioned.

Steve



Sep 22, 2017 at 09:22 PM





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