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Canon EOS 5D EF 24-70mm f/2.8L @ /3.5 70.0mm 1/60sec iso100



Sep 14, 2017 at 07:33 AM
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A very nice portrait RH. To my eye, the lady comes through friendly, warm, and open to your camera. She's beautifully dressed in that silky, jeweled, ceremonial garb. I like the background you've chosen to pose her against. as it complements her dress.

To taste, but a few suggestions. I would clone out the black streak in the background where the curtains are parted. Also, the lady seems close to the edges of the frame. I think your portrait could benefit by adding more breathing room around her body. I'd also like to see more of her dress below from where I assume you've cropped. Last, if my photo, I would brighten her eyes slightly to make them pop more.

Steve



Sep 14, 2017 at 01:16 PM
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Sep 14, 2017 at 02:23 PM
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Overall I prefer the second image but it seems a bit red in the face. But the eyes are better, and the whites are better.


Sep 14, 2017 at 05:34 PM







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