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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Summer on the Lake


Your comments and critiques welcome.

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Aug 27, 2017 at 12:30 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Summer on the Lake


Talk about color contrast! Reds MIGHT be a bit too vibrant and highlights looks a hair hot.

Do you have any leeway to pull back the cropping a little to show more lake?

Jeff



Aug 27, 2017 at 12:58 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Summer on the Lake


beavens wrote:
Talk about color contrast! Reds MIGHT be a bit too vibrant and highlights looks a hair hot.

Do you have any leeway to pull back the cropping a little to show more lake?

Jeff


Thanks Jeff. I was kind of torn on this one either to show the full scene or to crop and get closer to the canoe as I loved her body language. That red is powerful, but purposeful, and as was, not saturated.

Steve








Aug 27, 2017 at 01:08 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Summer on the Lake


eeneryma wrote:
Thanks Jeff. I was kind of torn on this one either to show the full scene or to crop and get closer to the canoe as I loved her body language. That red is powerful, but purposeful, and as was, not saturated.

Steve


I like the full scene (minus the pole on the treeline upper-left)! Oh I don't think you pushed the reds at all, but sometimes the cameras have a hard time with them and they come out a little hot. I'm saying I'd pull back from baseline.

Jeff



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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Summer on the Lake


Relaxing in a kayak. Don't often see the legs out like that. I prefer the first crop,.


Aug 27, 2017 at 03:42 PM
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+1 for more space at the bottom.

Prefer the "no sky" look. The light tonal value of the sky pulls, and then when you get there ... nothing there.

Cropped a smidgen off the left as well.

The red channel is pretty hot @ 253-255, but it does pull back.

Might open up the BG a touch, but that is preferential to how much you want to balance vs. weight the scene.







Aug 27, 2017 at 03:58 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Summer on the Lake


RustyBug wrote:
+1 for more space at the bottom.

Prefer the "no sky" look. The light tonal value of the sky pulls, and then when you get there ... nothing there.

Cropped a smidgen off the left as well.

The red channel is pretty hot @ 253-255, but it does pull back.

Might open up the BG a touch, but that is preferential to how much you want to balance vs. weight the scene.


Thanks Kent for your thoughtful analysis and rework.

Steve



Aug 28, 2017 at 12:38 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Summer on the Lake


beavens wrote:
I like the full scene (minus the pole on the treeline upper-left)! Oh I don't think you pushed the reds at all, but sometimes the cameras have a hard time with them and they come out a little hot. I'm saying I'd pull back from baseline.

Jeff


Your eagle eye always, didn't notice that tower.

Steve



Aug 28, 2017 at 12:40 PM







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