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shekarn64
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Trying out the new lens


How can I improve this?




  NIKON D810    105mm    f/1.6    1/400s    160 ISO    0.0 EV  






  NIKON D810    105mm    f/1.6    1/400s    160 ISO    0.0 EV  




Aug 21, 2017 at 03:24 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Trying out the new lens


I would turn off the strobe and use the available light. Move the subject to a spot where the light works.


Aug 21, 2017 at 03:34 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Trying out the new lens


I am ok with the flash.....what did you do in terms of PP to the first photo? The outline around her hair looks messed......


Aug 21, 2017 at 05:20 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Trying out the new lens


I would lighten the eyes, get rid of the shadows under her eyes and try poses where the model is at an angle to the camera.


Aug 21, 2017 at 06:35 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Trying out the new lens


Herb wrote:
I am ok with the flash.....what did you do in terms of PP to the first photo? The outline around her hair looks messed......


Trying to get rid of the loose hair. Guess have to try again!



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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Trying out the new lens


Desaturate the reds a little


Aug 22, 2017 at 02:09 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Trying out the new lens


They look a little underexposed to me. A little fill light to bring out her eyes would greatly help.
Douglas



Aug 22, 2017 at 01:44 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Trying out the new lens


were you closer to her on the first shot. The shallow dof seems to really stand out there and looks odd to me. I like the second shot much better.


Aug 25, 2017 at 06:19 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Trying out the new lens


I don't remember, but I may be very close to minimum focal distance.
egd5 wrote:
were you closer to her on the first shot. The shallow dof seems to really stand out there and looks odd to me. I like the second shot much better.





Aug 25, 2017 at 06:52 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Trying out the new lens


These are at least a stop under-exposed. For someone with this skin/hair color, the detail you want is in the shadows/blacks.


Aug 26, 2017 at 01:14 PM







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