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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Storytime


Thankful to have captured this moment tonight between my wife and our oldest son.




Canon 5D IV + 50mm f/1.2 L at f/1.2 1/125 ISO 3200



Jul 25, 2017 at 10:18 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Storytime


This is really nice, especially the child's expression of course. Might want to crop the pillow off the left side...other than that, sweet!



Jul 26, 2017 at 06:08 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Storytime


CMYK Designs wrote:
This is really nice, especially the child's expression of course. Might want to crop the pillow off the left side...other than that, sweet!


I think you're right. I initially kept the pillow in to capture a bit more of the scene, but I think the image is more focused cropped in a bit further:




Jul 26, 2017 at 07:42 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Storytime


Fantastic timing! What a precious textbook moment you have captured here. The look of excitement and wonder on your little ones face is just over the top perfect IMO.

+1 @ your new crop. That is exactly what I was going to suggest as well. Nice job!

I'll leave any other technicals to those that are more attuned to portraitures.

Dave



Jul 26, 2017 at 08:53 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Storytime


What Dave said, good catch, and welcome to the forum


Jul 26, 2017 at 09:10 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Storytime


Perhaps a few selective curves adjustments.

Steve







Jul 26, 2017 at 09:32 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Storytime


Love it! What a sweet moment, with adoring, engaged eyes on your son!
Love the BW conversion. Crop improves an already excellent image.
Print!!
Scott



Jul 26, 2017 at 06:43 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Storytime


Sweet...captures the moment perfectly.

Bob



Jul 26, 2017 at 07:55 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Storytime


I like this capture. His hands and feet lend an appeal to the original composition. Given that the boy's gaze is the gem, perhaps consider an additional alternate crop that places even more attention on his gaze, and perhaps some minor retouching:







Jul 27, 2017 at 04:02 PM





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