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Jul 19, 2017 at 12:35 PM
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Hey Ton,

Pretty cool shot here. I do like the way the sun is radiating out from behind the clouds. You might want to pull back on the yellow in the sky some, or at least in the upper left side where the sky instead of being blue looks like its a teal color.

Jim



Jul 19, 2017 at 01:34 PM
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JimFox wrote:
Hey Ton,

Pretty cool shot here. I do like the way the sun is radiating out from behind the clouds. You might want to pull back on the yellow in the sky some, or at least in the upper left side where the sky instead of being blue looks like its a teal color.

Jim

Thank you so much Jim, let me work on that.



Jul 19, 2017 at 02:52 PM
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I like everything up until the point where the sand dunes seemingly end. Where the light colored dunes meet the darker hills and upward through the image, it looks over processed to me.

With that said, I've seen a lot of your other images, and they are processed to perfection.



Jul 19, 2017 at 03:49 PM
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01Ryan10 wrote:
I like everything up until the point where the sand dunes seemingly end. Where the light colored dunes meet the darker hills and upward through the image, it looks over processed to me.

With that said, I've seen a lot of your other images, and they are processed to perfection.

Thank you Ryan, will work on it next time



Jul 19, 2017 at 03:58 PM
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I love the S curve of dune and clouds. Agree on the teal sky. Nice capture.


Jul 19, 2017 at 04:56 PM
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Love the symmetry of the dunes and clouds - almost a yin & yang thing!


Jul 19, 2017 at 05:37 PM
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Jim Dockery wrote:
I love the S curve of dune and clouds. Agree on the teal sky. Nice capture.

thank you so much Dockery
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triggermike wrote:
Love the symmetry of the dunes and clouds - almost a yin & yang thing!

thank you very much Mike.



Jul 19, 2017 at 05:46 PM
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Looks sweet to me Ton. I'll go against the grain here and say pop the sky up a touch more. To each our own.


Jul 19, 2017 at 06:03 PM
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psharvic wrote:
Looks sweet to me Ton. I'll go against the grain here and say pop the sky up a touch more. To each our own.

thank you so much Psharvic.



Jul 19, 2017 at 06:14 PM
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Love the sand/sky S-curve comp and agree with others to knock out the teal in upper left. Dave


Jul 19, 2017 at 07:42 PM
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p.1 #12 · p.1 #12 · Death Valley


Awesome capture and composition!


Jul 19, 2017 at 08:56 PM
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Very cool how the clouds create an "S" shape with the dunes. I like Jim's suggestion as well.
Best,
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Jul 19, 2017 at 10:36 PM
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p.1 #14 · p.1 #14 · Death Valley


The dune and sky 'S' curve and the sun rays are quite wonderful and make for a unique image. Great sample of the importance of being there at the right time.
Well done!



Jul 20, 2017 at 01:20 AM
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Wow, what a composition. Nicely spotted and processed.

Love the subdued colors as well. Great work man.



Jul 20, 2017 at 04:18 AM
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dbehrens wrote:
Love the sand/sky S-curve comp and agree with others to knock out the teal in upper left. Dave

thank you so much Dave
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bobbytan wrote:
Awesome capture and composition!

thank you so much Bobbytan
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Fred Miranda wrote:
Very cool how the clouds create an "S" shape with the dunes. I like Jim's suggestion as well.
Best,
Fred

thank you so much Fred
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gpelpel wrote:
The dune and sky 'S' curve and the sun rays are quite wonderful and make for a unique image. Great sample of the importance of being there at the right time.
Well done!

thank you very much
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rhawidantas wrote:
Wow, what a composition. Nicely spotted and processed.

Love the subdued colors as well. Great work man.

thank you so much



Jul 20, 2017 at 03:44 PM
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That comp is amazing but the colors are all over the place. Green in the sky, super blue and magenta elsewhere, etc. Bring it back to reality or go b/w but this is over the top and unnecessary for such an incredible shot (imo) <3

aF



Jul 20, 2017 at 03:48 PM
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p.1 #18 · p.1 #18 · Death Valley


aFeinberg wrote:
That comp is amazing but the colors are all over the place. Green in the sky, super blue and magenta elsewhere, etc. Bring it back to reality or go b/w but this is over the top and unnecessary for such an incredible shot (imo) <3

aF


thank you so much, I will do B&W



Jul 20, 2017 at 04:40 PM
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p.1 #19 · p.1 #19 · Death Valley


Ton,

Another nice one, I do agree it may work very well in BW.

Ryan



Jul 20, 2017 at 05:19 PM
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p.1 #20 · p.1 #20 · Death Valley


Wonderful image!


Jul 20, 2017 at 08:40 PM
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