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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Red Cesna


Posted in Architecture already. Would love some feedback as I'm not used to shooting this type of photo. Thanks!





35mm | 1/40s | f/8 | ISO 100




Jul 14, 2017 at 09:52 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Red Cesna


I like the contrast of the red against the neutals, the horizontal lines in play (including how the background planes' wings line up) and the panning capture employed.

I'd like to see this one a little bigger if possible - maybe around 1000-1200px on the longest edge?

I think the biggest detractor for me here is the line of buildings in the background.

Jeff



Jul 14, 2017 at 10:36 AM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Red Cesna


Here it is with a 1500px long edge







Jul 14, 2017 at 10:38 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Red Cesna


Much better for viewing!

Perhaps bring those shadows up some?

Jeff



Jul 14, 2017 at 10:40 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Red Cesna


Very nice job of panning.


Jul 14, 2017 at 01:11 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Red Cesna


Brown Field

+1 Panning, maybe crop down the top so you don't have the mountain in the BG along with the buildings. The parked craft make for an interesting juxtaposition, but they also make for some "clutter" to the image.

Here's a warmer crop with a kiss of USM in two versions ... one leaving the windshield color, the other rendering it more clear.












Jul 14, 2017 at 06:39 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Red Cesna


Thanks for all the comments and critique. I kind of like the BG mountains myself vs. the tighter crop. I'll play around with the shadows though.


Jul 15, 2017 at 01:18 AM





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