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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Condo View


This was a quick grab, but I think it's a keeper.
Tweaks?
Suggestions?

Scott



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  Canon EOS REBEL T5    EF17-40mm f/4L USM lens    17mm    f/7.1    1/60s    100 ISO    -0.3 EV  




Jun 19, 2017 at 08:51 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Condo View


Very dramatic, with a crisp look and what looks like a great sky. I like the way you divided up the scene in the window panes.


Jun 19, 2017 at 08:53 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Condo View


This is really awesome! I think it would look really cool on a wall with each section printed out separately. On that note, I might look to drop the blacks/shadows on the windowpane to remove all detail.

Neat one, Scott.

Jeff



Jun 20, 2017 at 11:54 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Condo View


Quick grab ... looks like you grabbed some Rule of Thirds, Golden Mean & Fibonacci along the way.


Jun 20, 2017 at 12:49 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Condo View


ben egbert wrote:
Very dramatic, with a crisp look and what looks like a great sky. I like the way you divided up the scene in the window panes.


thank you Ben

Scott



Jun 20, 2017 at 01:07 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Condo View


beavens wrote:
This is really awesome! I think it would look really cool on a wall with each section printed out separately. On that note, I might look to drop the blacks/shadows on the windowpane to remove all detail.

Neat one, Scott.

Jeff


Thanks Jeff. When I first developed it I thought the panes were much darker. I think your are right. I will darken them; debating whether to leave a hint of detail, but probably not.

Scott



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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Condo View


RustyBug wrote:
Quick grab ... looks like you grabbed some Rule of Thirds, Golden Mean & Fibonacci along the way.


So I get three Gold Stars!

Scott



Jun 20, 2017 at 01:09 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Condo View


Great composition - looks like I forgot the "send" button :?

Bob



Jun 20, 2017 at 02:57 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Condo View


sbeme wrote:
So I get three Gold Stars!

Scott


Matches your gold sky.



Jun 20, 2017 at 04:09 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Condo View


Ben's assessment is spot on in the way each window pane provides a separate view.


Jun 20, 2017 at 10:37 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Condo View


I really like this, but not so sure that you should lose all the detail in the window frame. That defines that is was shot through a window and not some attempt at making it look like it was!....Maybe a little darker, but let the eye see some detail...my $.02!


Jun 24, 2017 at 11:38 AM







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