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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Portland Saturday Market - performer


Comments welcomed - not much traction on City, Street... forum.

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Jun 12, 2017 at 07:27 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Portland Saturday Market - performer


3 and 1 work the best for me here. Not sure I'm feeling 2 as much.

i think both could use tighter crops. See below for thoughts.

I hoping the tones don't get jacked up - if so, pay no mind please.

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Jun 12, 2017 at 04:03 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Portland Saturday Market - performer


beavens wrote:
3 and 1 work the best for me here. Not sure I'm feeling 2 as much.

i think both could use tighter crops. See below for thoughts.

I hoping the tones don't get jacked up - if so, pay no mind please.

Jeff


Agreed. Being and conveying being don't necessarily translate.

Bob



Jun 12, 2017 at 08:32 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Portland Saturday Market - performer


#1 has a certain "meh" to it that I think the level of "disinterest" from the guy looking at his phone depicts.

#2 has a certain juxtaposition that might warrant a different crop to better reveal it.

#3 by far my fav of the set. Diggin' the lines / tones.

I'm okay with about 1/2 the haircut / trim off the top that Jeff gave it (i.e. gotta leave the brick in). But, I think the right hand side needs to be left as the OP to let the lines of the guitar breathe (vs. chopped off).

PP on #3 seems a bit blocky / washed in a few areas. A selective pull-back on some gamma might be in order at the ends. Not a deal breaker, just something you might revisit (kinda like the multi-iterations of beekeeper) to see how it plays out.



Jun 13, 2017 at 05:33 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Portland Saturday Market - performer


RustyBug wrote:
I'm okay with about 1/2 the haircut / trim off the top that Jeff gave it (i.e. gotta leave the brick in). But, I think the right hand side needs to be left as the OP to let the lines of the guitar breathe (vs. chopped off).



We're gonna have to disagree on this one! I thought the same as you initially, that it would be sin to chop crop that and not let it breathe. But after looking at this I think that it's benefits the pic (to my eye) to crop that off and keep the eyes in the frame. I feel that it forms this nice visual triangle that works well for me.

Jeff







Jun 13, 2017 at 01:55 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Portland Saturday Market - performer


beavens wrote:
We're gonna have to disagree on this one! I thought the same as you initially, that it would be sin to chop crop that and not let it breathe. But after looking at this I think that it's benefits the pic (to my eye) to crop that off and keep the eyes in the frame. I feel that it forms this nice visual triangle that works well for me.

Jeff


Thanks Jeff,

Very helpful insight.

Bob




Jun 13, 2017 at 06:37 PM





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