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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Main Highlight Highlights Mane


Say that three times fast.

Whatcha think about this one? Crop feel too awkward with all the "chopping" or is that mug enough of a draw to not notice/

Thanks!

Jeff







Jun 09, 2017 at 04:16 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Main Highlight Highlights Mane


Anything?


Jun 15, 2017 at 07:20 AM
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Crop seems fine to me. The very light background though tends to pull my eye away from the horse. Maybe darken the background slightly to reduce that pull.

Steve



Jun 15, 2017 at 08:44 AM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Main Highlight Highlights Mane


eeneryma wrote:
Crop seems fine to me. The very light background though tends to pull my eye away from the horse. Maybe darken the background slightly to reduce that pull.

Steve


Thanks for the feedback, Steve!!



Jun 15, 2017 at 08:47 AM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Main Highlight Highlights Mane


Jeff,

Looks good to me, like the comp with triangular mass of horse and light background.

Don't know why but the ubiquitous flies around a horse's eyes always bother me - makes me want to shoo them away (not suggesting a clone job but it is an option)

Had to play a bit..

Bob







Jun 18, 2017 at 07:58 AM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Main Highlight Highlights Mane


Bob Jarman wrote:
Jeff,

Looks good to me, like the comp with triangular mass of horse and light background.

Don't know why but the ubiquitous flies around a horse's eyes always bother me - makes me want to shoo them away (not suggesting a clone job but it is an option)

Had to play a bit..

Bob


+1 on darkening background.

Steve



Jun 18, 2017 at 08:47 AM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Main Highlight Highlights Mane


Thanks for the thoughts and rework, Bob!

I hear you about the flies but there is this weird part of me that likes to leave well enough alone if I can. If you think the flies here are bad, the ticks our in Africa are something else! Hell, the oxpeckers out there can live solely off picking ticks from other creatures! I bet the horses over here wish they had that kinda help.

I like the tweaks and will have to see how I feel about the overall background and how it works into the pic. I dig the added warming tone.

Jeff




Jun 18, 2017 at 06:55 PM





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