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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Flower close-ups

I'd love any constructive criticism on any of these. I want to improve in this wonderful hobby...

Thanks!

Jun 08, 2017 at 05:19 PM

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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Flower close-ups

The first is well composed yet does not seem sharp. The second is only sharp on the closest pedals and the rest lacks detail. The last is the best of the 3 yet would be better if the steman were also sharp.

Morris

Jun 08, 2017 at 06:56 PM

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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Flower close-ups

I like the first two a lot. They have a dreamy quality, particularly the second. I don't mind the softness of a selective focus shot as long as there is a definite point of focus. I have a hard time seeing any specific unsharpness at this posted size but Morris may be more astute. Anyway, I love the bokeh in the first two. The colors are complementary and there is enough content in them to add some context to the flowers.

Jun 11, 2017 at 09:42 PM


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