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Beautiful girl. Love #1! Great portrait.
On #2 the "pinky" finger is distracting. I would have preferred the relaxed hand pose in #3 to be used on #2 and maybe even more of the arm. The other thing to watch out for the "football shoulder" on #3 and #4. Whatever is closest to the lens looks biggest. In #4 look at the size of shoulder versus her face. Turning her more toward the camera would have improved both these images.
You did a lot of things right with the backgrounds, wardrobe, lighting and composition. Improving the little posing issues will really strengthen your portrait work.
Hope that doesn't sound too critical.
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