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Archive 2017 · Haley's Senior Pix

  
 
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Haley's Senior Pix


Celtic Beauty! That hair, Freckles, and No Makeup!!!!





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Jun 04, 2017 at 07:33 AM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Haley's Senior Pix


Beautiful girl. Love #1! Great portrait.

On #2 the "pinky" finger is distracting. I would have preferred the relaxed hand pose in #3 to be used on #2 and maybe even more of the arm. The other thing to watch out for the "football shoulder" on #3 and #4. Whatever is closest to the lens looks biggest. In #4 look at the size of shoulder versus her face. Turning her more toward the camera would have improved both these images.

You did a lot of things right with the backgrounds, wardrobe, lighting and composition. Improving the little posing issues will really strengthen your portrait work.

Hope that doesn't sound too critical.



Jun 04, 2017 at 08:03 AM
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story_teller wrote:
Beautiful girl. Love #1! Great portrait.

On #2 the "pinky" finger is distracting. I would have preferred the relaxed hand pose in #3 to be used on #2 and maybe even more of the arm. The other thing to watch out for the "football shoulder" on #3 and #4. Whatever is closest to the lens looks biggest. In #4 look at the size of shoulder versus her face. Turning her more toward the camera would have improved both these images.

You did a lot of things right with the backgrounds, wardrobe, lighting and composition. Improving the little posing issues will really
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thanks for your comments




Jun 04, 2017 at 01:11 PM





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