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Your comments and critiques always welcome.

Steve




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May 31, 2017 at 08:07 PM
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Beautiful color. For composition I would rather see a tighter shot of just the painting on the right, or the one on the left. That massive concrete column running down the middle spoils the flow here.

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Jun 01, 2017 at 01:37 AM
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KCook0 wrote:
Beautiful color. For composition I would rather see a tighter shot of just the painting on the right, or the one on the left. That massive concrete column running down the middle spoils the flow here.

Kelly


Appreciate your comments about the compositon Kelly. One of my goals in the photo was to show the range of art on view, from the religious painting on the left to the abstract nude on the right, both probably 4 or 5 centuries apart. Times have changed.

Steve



Jun 01, 2017 at 08:07 AM
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I like it, there is a lot going on here and it begs your eyes to explore.


Jun 01, 2017 at 08:24 AM
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rgoosney wrote:
I like it, there is a lot going on here and it begs your eyes to explore.


Thanks RG!

Steve



Jun 01, 2017 at 08:27 AM
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Awesome capture of contemplation, longing, misspent youth, constraint, barriers, reflection, etc. I don't know if I need the descriptive signage on the wall (maybe crop?), which may lead to other re-balance but again....well done!


Jun 01, 2017 at 11:07 AM
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What could be construed only as "window gazing" goes beyond that with the subtly quiet passing from the left frame of the elderly gentleman


Jun 01, 2017 at 12:35 PM
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Rick Joyce wrote:
What could be construed only as "window gazing" goes beyond that with the subtly quiet passing from the left frame of the elderly gentleman


Appreciate your comments Rick.

Steve



Jun 01, 2017 at 08:36 PM
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I'm not really feeling the connection on this one, personally. I do like all of the squares and rectangles, but the 2/3rd weight of the left feels awkward/incomplete/imbalanced against the 1/3rd of the right. Could just be personal preference!

What I do think needs to be addressed is the heavy cyan cast in play here. Check out a quick cyan drop below!

Jeff







Jun 02, 2017 at 04:28 PM
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beavens wrote:
I'm not really feeling the connection on this one, personally. I do like all of the squares and rectangles, but the 2/3rd weight of the left feels awkward/incomplete/imbalanced against the 1/3rd of the right. Could just be personal preference!

What I do think needs to be addressed is the heavy cyan cast in play here. Check out a quick cyan drop below!

Jeff

Thanks for pointing out that color cast Jeff. Totally passed me by.
Steve



Jun 02, 2017 at 06:01 PM





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