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Kevin T
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p.1 #1 · p.1 #1 · Morning Composition


Too much silhouette?










Apr 17, 2017 at 12:04 PM
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p.1 #2 · p.1 #2 · Morning Composition


I don't think so. Wouldn't look right with shadows pulled up.
On the other hand, not sure I would crop this wide, even though I see the appeal of the anchoring trees.
What about two thirds from the right border to the mountain, leaving some of the incline on the right. And then some off the top to rebalance? While I like the two trees, the right one then dominates the mountain which is still the central feature.

Scott



Apr 17, 2017 at 12:14 PM
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p.1 #3 · p.1 #3 · Morning Composition


The more illuminated section of the mountain near bottom left provides a refreshing counterpoint to a generally silhouetted mountainous scenic.

A minor problem is a small dust spot near top left which could be eliminated preferably by a downward crop.



Apr 17, 2017 at 12:24 PM
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p.1 #4 · p.1 #4 · Morning Composition


Perhaps a pano crop going from lower-left to upper-right diagonals?

Jeff







Apr 17, 2017 at 12:36 PM
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p.1 #5 · p.1 #5 · Morning Composition


I like the pano crop.


Apr 17, 2017 at 12:47 PM
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p.1 #6 · p.1 #6 · Morning Composition


Funny I cropped this shot 5 different ways before just posting the full version but never once did I cut out the sky so I appreciate the intuition here. This is the view from my back porch so I see it often. I was perhaps a bit smitten with the softness of the clouds.


Apr 17, 2017 at 01:05 PM
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p.1 #7 · p.1 #7 · Morning Composition


Kevin T wrote:
This is the view from my back porch so I see it often.


Well now I don't really like you so much.

Jeff




Apr 17, 2017 at 01:16 PM
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p.1 #8 · p.1 #8 · Morning Composition


beavens wrote:
Well now I don't really like you so much.

Jeff



Ha! lol




Apr 17, 2017 at 01:23 PM
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p.1 #9 · p.1 #9 · Morning Composition


Here is one of the crops I did with the zoom.







Apr 17, 2017 at 01:41 PM
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p.1 #10 · p.1 #10 · Morning Composition


Both crop variations add interest imo


Apr 17, 2017 at 02:21 PM
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p.1 #11 · p.1 #11 · Morning Composition


Very much like your first pano crop. The two trees act as guardians to that majestic mountain.

I could never live in such a horrible place.
I'd never leave for work.


Dave



Apr 17, 2017 at 08:39 PM





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